Sketched storyboard feedback

We showed several people our sketched storyboards and asked for their opinion about the style of drawings and the information given. This is the statement that an 18 years old male said:

‘Several good drawings but lacks finer detail, try to include facial expressions’
This statement tells us quite simply that our storyboard lacked that finer detail that maybe we should have included, therefore if we were to re-do the sketches it would be something worth considering for mainly our own benefit as they will show details that we can include in our final trailer. The next statement was from a 17 years old female and she said:

‘Nice idea but makes sure you complete all areas required’
Looking at this statement we noticed that two areas in our sketched storyboards were not completed and this was down to us as a pair not knowing what music to choose for our trailer and how long each shot should be, but saying that we should have had an idea at a time but instead we left the options blank. The last statement we are going to include was from a 18 year old female and she said:

‘Make sure all of your characters are the same size in every shot’
This is very true for several of our drawing because the characters seem to change height or weight in the blink of an eye and again if we were to re-do the sketches it would be something that we would have to make sure that we got right. All of these comments that we have included have been very helpful for us as a group because they were taken directly from our primary audience and we know have an indication that we are on the right path and that they think the trailer is starting to take shape and look like something they would want to go and see.