Changes that we need to make...

After showing a select few our first draft and receiving feedback we decided that we needed to make some changes to our trailer that would make the final draft look better and feel like a real trailer more than it was in it's current stage. Below is a list of those changes, some are immediate changes while others will need attention to detail:

Add professional titles - to do this we will used After Effects to make the titles animate. We have already included titles into the trailer however they are to basic and we want to show off what we can do with After Effects.

Make the music flow better - to do this we will need to adjust the volume options on each video to make the music flow properly without any abrupt endings. This was something that we got told quite a lot from our feedback group.

Add more footage - We both know that we had around 20 seconds of nothing half way through the trailer as we were still deciding what was the best approach to fill the gap and maintain that same atmosphere that we have already created. The added footage was something that we knew would be a possibility and looking at changes that we need to make it is the perfect chance to add something that is just as good as the previous clips that we had shot.

After making these changes we will show another group of our target audience the second draft to get their opinion. If any changes need to made we will do so before presenting the final draft to our target audience. The changes that we have outlined will help us a lot in our goal to creating a professional looking trailer.